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This is my first reader insert~ I am kind of new to DA. So please dear readers have some Mercy.
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You and Germany were quietly drinking your cool drinks.
How did this happen again you thought to yourself?
"Ah..yes I arrived early for my BIG interview... after Ludwig stated the obvious we went to get drinks and here we are.." you answered yourself.

The two of you quietly drank your Green tinted drinks.

And With a "thud," you put the glass down,
..just then you caught Ludwig staring at you..well at your lips to be exact.
You could feel your cheeks heat up instantly
"L-Ludwig," you stammered

"Uh..,"He immediately realized what he was doing.
"... Sorry about that! It's just that your lips..,"


"M-my lips...?" And now you could definitely feel a blush creeping up your cheeks.

"They are...," He stated with straight face.

"Y-yes?!" You said with a hint of eagerness to know what he wanted to tell you.

"..Tinted green from the drink,"
Ludwig stated with his usual poker face.

Your eyes widened immediately, you took out your small panda mirror that Yao got you last year. It was so cute you fell in love with it at first sight.

And to your shock they were tinted green, to make it worse a dark shade of green!

You licked your lips hoping that the colour will fade.
You were so worried a that you didn't notice Ludwig watching you.

Ludwig's P.O.V

I watch her as she lick her lips somehow it made me feel uncomfortable in a certain way.

I could feel my cheeks heat up.

"Here ______," I handed her a wet tissue.

She looks at me as if she just realized that I was there.

She quickly grabbed the tissue and mumbled quick thanks.

I watched her try to rub of the green tint.

She suddenly turned her head to me and I could see tears forming in her beautiful (e/c) eyes.

Back to your P.O.V

With tears in your eyes and with a panic in your voice you quivered
"L-Ludwig the green tint won't come off.. And and I have a interview and wh-what if it doesn't fade of I time..I-I'll give a bad impression of myself!,"

Ludwig looked in your eyes, hoping you would calm down a little.

and said, in his ever so monotone voice.
"Here give me the tissue and let me do it...," realizing what he had just said he blushed a dark shade of red.

"Uh.. I mean..,"

You looked at him and handed him the tissue not even hesitating that's how much you wanted the tint off your lips.

"H-here," you said suddenly realizing the hesitation in your voice.

As Ludwig took the wet tissue, you leaned toward him slightly pulling your lips toward him.

As you saw Him lean closer, you blushed.

And to your shock, ever so gently he tried to take off the tint.

He sighed not succeeding,
Both of you were so close to each other that you could feel his breath.

Before you leaned back he said
"C-close your eyes and let me try one more thing,
Don't open them until I tell you too."

Blushingly you did as you were told.

" Th-Thump, Th-Thump "

You could feel your heart beat at a fast pace.
Not a moment later you could feel Ludwig's rough fingers. Trace your lips.
It sent shivers down your spine,
You opened your mouth to say something only to be cut off by Ludwig's soft lips.

Your heart started to beat faster and faster by the second.

You could feel him kiss gently yet with a hint of passion.

You could feel this indescribable sensation.

He licked you lips gently ,it felt as if he too was trying to make the Green tint fade away.

you wanted to pull away but for or an unknown reason,you didn't.

He gripped your hands not letting you escape his lips but to you it felt like he wanted you to respond to his kiss.

And you did your lips were now in sync with each other' rhythm.

But it wasn't for long before you parted in need for air.

Ludwig looked at your lips and smiled sweetly but it was a wasted since your eyes were still closed.

"__-______ you can open your eyes now,"

You both stared at each other and blush a darker shade of red by the second.

"It-it's gone the green tint on your lips,"

You raised your hand and slowly traced your slightly wet lips.

"Th-Thanks,"

"______"

"Y- Yes?"

"F-For a long time now I wanted to say this... ich liebe dich ______,"

"I-I love you too Ludwig
I love you too."

You stared into each other's eyes lovingly.
Holding hands and forgetting about rest of the world.
The moment felt everlasting.....













That is..until the waiter interrupted...
Hello!
um..yea..well i hope you like it.
Tell me if it needs the mature content on! i can do that.
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Translation
ich liebe dich - i love you.

Comments are greatly appreciated! :)
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Finally

NOTE!- I DON’T own Hetalia or Ludwig/Germany, they belong to the rightful owner!
I own the story.
You belong to Ludwig~ (if you want~ or yourself!)

Me:see you next time reader-chan!
Germany: S-seeya m-meine Liebe ////
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:iconwhybot221:
Whybot221 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
So freakin CUTE!!!!!!!!!! :D
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:iconkyrategirl:
kyrategirl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015
OMGERSH best ending ever XD darn waiter!
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:iconmelody-lyric:
Melody-lyric Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cute
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ExperimentaI Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Stupid waiter :c
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carterrico99 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
LOL it's always the waiter
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:iconvanillasweetness125:
VanillaSweetness125 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How much do you want to bet that the 'waiter' was France?
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:iconkyrategirl:
kyrategirl Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015
I would like to make a bet *clears throat* 2 turtle doves, and a partridge in a pear tree.
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:iconvanillasweetness125:
VanillaSweetness125 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Bet accepted *breathes* 4 calling birds, three French hens...... Wait. 0.0
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:iconkyrategirl:
kyrategirl Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
Two turtle doves and a partridge in a pear tree. Anybody else wanting to make a bet?
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:iconvanillasweetness125:
VanillaSweetness125 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Anyone? Anyone at all? Come place your bets right here!! XD
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:iconkyrategirl:
kyrategirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
Excepting all pets, i mean bets XD
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:iconvanillasweetness125:
VanillaSweetness125 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD *Whispers* But we'll take the pets too~ *Cough*
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:iconkyrategirl:
kyrategirl Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Yes *cough* *cough* and maybe the pickles- maybe...
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JINX991 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
50$ shall we ask author-san?
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:iconvanillasweetness125:
VanillaSweetness125 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Certainly. I'm all in. *Hands over cash*
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:iconjinx991:
JINX991 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
me too *does the same* AUTHOR-SAN WE REQUIRE YOUR ASSISTANTS!!!
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:iconvanillasweetness125:
VanillaSweetness125 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please!  :iconpuppydogeyesplz:
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:iconytracey:
YTracey Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
FUDGING WAITER DUDE!!!
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   General Artist
(Me/Vietnam) :iconthrowplz: GTFO WAITER! 
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:iconkawaii-otaku-girl:
kawaii-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Damn waiter...
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NyanGirShadow Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well fruk you too, waiter person.
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014   General Artist
Me: -looks at waiter with death glare and she falls- ^.^
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MattSmithDoctor Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I bet the waiter was there the entire time XD
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:iconsakura-yotobari:
Sakura-Yotobari Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll kill that waiter..... omg, the waiter should be Feli~ that would be so cute, I'd forgive him! <3
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4EverSlendermansGirl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Stupid waiter...he ruined everything! XD
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Fortheloveofchaos Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconitssofluffyplz: SO MUCH FLUFF. whoever invented green drinks was a friggin' genius! Great story!
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Oresama401 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Me: Go bother someone, waiter-san. Can't you see we're having a moment.
Waiter: *walks away and never comes back*
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:iconwinterevenings:
WinterEvenings Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh no! i just lost a waiter to work in this cafe!
*runs after the waiter* waiter-chan, come back please!!
 
*looks back at the two of you*
You two, have fun now!

(Thank you for reading!!)
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hetalialover72 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Nice way to ruin the moment mr./mrs. Waiter person!!!!!!

This fic is so cute!!!!
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:iconwinterevenings:
WinterEvenings Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you!!
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:iconhetalialover72:
hetalialover72 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Your welcome
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saskiarijkens Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013

I'm now thinking if he planned it with the green stuff......

if he did, he's very smart

if not.....still so cute x3

 

you have a new fan......it's ME!!!! :D *I know what your thinking.....should I be happy with such a hyperactive slightly crazy fan?.....the answer is yes!!!*

and to make you happier about it *hands you a lot of chocolate and candy*

 

:D:D:D

 

so keep writing like this, cause I think it's awesome :D

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:iconwinterevenings:
WinterEvenings Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Accepts the chocolate* Thank you! i am so happy!
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saskiarijkens Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013

chocolate never fails!!!!!

 

:D:D:D

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GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Oh my gosh, I think i died , and read this in heaven, surely felt like heaven! Awesome job.
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Nihaoeveryone Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Artist
AHHHH! My foot is doing that thing again! I love it!
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:iconotakugirl14:
OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That was AWESOME YOU DID GREAT I LOVED IT THANK YOU 
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:iconbloodlove25:
BloodLove25 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
STUPID WAITER GOD WHY I WAS SO HAPPY AND HE JUST HAAAD TO RUIN IT.
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EmoHetaliaJapan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013   Writer
ah my god Spain :iconspainsparklesplz: why did you haft to butt in XD great story i loved it :iconiloveyouplz:
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lollysholl Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Thanks a lot Spain. Thanks a freaking lot.
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:iconnightwishvodka:
NightwishVodka Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yay a beautiful moment interrupted once again by a damn waiter.
:icongermanyfacepalmplz: :icongermanyfacepalmplz: :icongermanyfacepalmplz: :icongermanyfacepalmplz:

.... me: Thank you for ruining my beautiful moment. :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconclapplz: :iconfuplz:
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:iconwinterevenings:
WinterEvenings Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That waiter must have had something against the two of you.

(Thanks for reading!)
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:iconnightwishvodka:
NightwishVodka Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
That damn waiter. Well anyway I enjoyed the story and I'm sure that waiter just really wanted to get punched in the face that day.
My face when done with the waiter: :iconevilgrinplz:
My face when looking at Germany after torturing that waiter: :iconsmile-luplz:
Let us continue my dear German. I hope to see more from you bella ragazza.
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:iconwinterevenings:
WinterEvenings Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw thanks! that was my first reader insert. I have written more since then!
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:iconnightwishvodka:
NightwishVodka Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yay! Time to read, right bella ragazza? :iconyuihugplz:
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:iconwinterevenings:
WinterEvenings Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! please do!
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:iconnightwishvodka:
NightwishVodka Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
No problemo! I already read all of them!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
:iconifaintplz:
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
YEP
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
:P
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